Hey bloggers during lockdown our class had to do a quick write which means we look at a photo and describe what we see what we feel what we hear and what we could taste this is my first attempt.
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, September 10, 2021
Lockdown work
Hey bloggers during lockdown our class had to do a quick write which means we look at a photo and describe what we see what we feel what we hear and what we could taste this is my first attempt.
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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ReplyDeleteHi Eva, this was very interesting to read! I liked how you included the picture to show us. Maybe next time you can add more punctuation. Good job!
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